Friday, September 16, 2011

Day 5, Item 2: 30-Page Group Critique

From the gals at Tangled Up In Words:

A group critique of the first 30 pages (or 3 chapters) of a manuscript. Winner will get critiques from at least 4 of the Tangled Girls as well as our resident published author, Jennifer L. Armentrout (at least 5 in all).

We are 5 girls who write and decided to blog about it together! Our members include: Christina Ferko, Danielle Bunner, Patricia Osei, Cindy Thomas, and Drea Chapman. Tangled is a place where we can talk about the writing journey, about different aspects of writing, and (our biggest goal) build a community of writers. We need each other and we can learn so much from each other. That is why we are here.

Our Resident Published Author is Jennifer L. Armentrout, author of YA & Adult books including, HALF-BLOOD 10/18/2011 (Spencer Hill Press) and OBSIDIAN 12/2011 (Entangled).

Learn more about Tangled Up In Words at the blog or follow them on Twitter.

This item will close on Sunday, September 18. Highest bid timestamped 10PM (EST) or earlier wins.


  1. $40.00

  2. $60.00

  3. Woah, I am so confused. Sorry, but what exactly do we have to do in order to enter?

  4. Hi Peony!

    To bid on an item, simply type in the amount you'd like to bid (in U.S. dollars) as a comment on that item's page. Also, please leave your email address so we can contact you in case you win!

    Feel free to check out our "How It Works" page and our "FAQs" on the navigation bar as well! If you are still confused, you are more than welcome to email us.

    Caroline Richmond & The Read for Relief Team

  5. $70.00

  6. Eek! $75


  7. $100

    julicragghilliard at

  8. $110 So worth it!

  9. Bidding is now closed---congratulations Anon, you've won! We'll send you an email with details asap!

  10. I am so excited! Thanks so much.